Class diary for students to write about a given topic. I will use it to evaluate their written compentence.
Thursday, 7 April 2011
At the end of year tour
This happened at the end of year -trip- tour, we were Inma and I in the hotel room -Inma and I were in the hotel room- . When I said it was -I went- for clothes to another room, then went two and the door was closed. Then we realized we could not enter as the key estava -was- inside. And we had to ask the cleaners who (passed through there that we opened) ¿?.
my vacation
last year I went to the beach with my family. -We- we were all standing in the water, -we- get out -with- my cousins and i went for a pond and there I -saw? a crab- cangrejo.-I- a (beak a step) ¿? despite that not everyone had a great time. -I will- repeat it.
**My Holiday**

Last summer I went to the beach .I was walking along the beach.. I had a bath and the water was very cold. I went -lunch- lunching with a few friends in the beach and (there were done we by night) ¿?. It was very nice.... -At- In the night, we buy -bought- drinks and we did a holiday... Then we -had a bath- gave to ourselves a bath, because -it was very hot- towards a lot of heat in the night...
HISTORIA
A DAY AT THE FAIR
My cousin and I went to the fair and we got lost.
But I tried to call my moter and I had steal the phone and I could not cal. It tok me all day looking the show, until they found me.
But I tried to call my moter and I had steal the phone and I could not cal. It tok me all day looking the show, until they found me.
aventure !!!!
my cousin and me climbed to the tree and throw a ball tennis and gave me the bald guy!!!
My uncle is pissed off a lot but we found that we were well hidden and my cousin wanted to enter the bathroom and we had to down two and I had to hide in the hall.
enter my aunt and I saw, and when he came out my cousin's bathroom.
caught the tennis ball and we got to the tree where we throw the ball again but now no luck.
My uncle is pissed off a lot but we found that we were well hidden and my cousin wanted to enter the bathroom and we had to down two and I had to hide in the hall.
enter my aunt and I saw, and when he came out my cousin's bathroom.
caught the tennis ball and we got to the tree where we throw the ball again but now no luck.
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